All Comments on 'A Dream Vacation Ch. 03'

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mammoetmammoetalmost 10 years ago
great story

loved all three chapters, will there be a number 4?

ZephuZephualmost 10 years ago
Loved the chapters!

These 3 chapters were amazing and very detailed! I hope there will be a chapter 4 and so on.

TornadoTysTornadoTysalmost 10 years ago
A Man's Dream

Very good story and a good read.

Needed abit more info on why see left the hotel room and what the last two films were, i.e, Lesbian, group, interacial, ect, etc

arrowglassarrowglassabout 9 years ago
Great story!

Have enjoyed the first three chapters...will be reading on!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved the suspense

The twist was good, please write more, you're good

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
too brief

The third chapter in this lovely romance story is much too brief, in all aspects, but it has real drama, especially towards the ending, which leaves the reader eager to find out what will happen next. The plot is well-conceived, but the love scene is much too brief, skipped over in just a few chapters.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

The twist where he marries and it really doesn't say it was Marketa/Vicky but yet again it does, doesn't it? We will see in the next chapter. Well done 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

10 stars again! In about 5 months, they will both change once again. Vicki will become mama bear ready to protect her baby and husband. There is life after being an adult movie actress. Wait until she holds HER BABY for the first time!

IntoblackIntoblack11 months ago

I love stories with happy endings!

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