All Comments on 'Life of James Ch. 01'

I loved evry minute of this for tis to be your first male-on-male story you did a damn good job. I was near climax without even touching myself. I hope that they keep coming you are a very talented writer. Pretty please keep them cumming.

I love how you don't go straight to the fucking scene. It's that exploratory moment in the beginning of affairs like this that is so erotic and tantalizing. This is the ideal piece for me and would want to read more of them. Rubbing against one another is so much hotter than actual fucking sometimes. Way to go!

I couldn't wait to cum!!!!!

I really enjoyed this story, I couldn't help rubbing myself as I read it.

It was well written and wonderfully descriptive.

I couldnt stop playing with myself, great

It was the best gay literature I have read in a long time, possibly of all time. I'm female and I totaly get off on reading gay porn and this, well it blew my mind. I adore it! This has to be my favorite... I love the way you use your words as well and don't just go straight into the sex. It's a great piece. I'm going to have to recomend this to a few of my friends!

Thank you for a truly wonderful read! ;3

xxxx

The way you encaptured the realism of that situation was incredible. It was really believable and your skill for writing turned me on alot in that story- well done, keep writing <3 I'm not at all gay, yet I came.

Wow, what a brilliant story! Normally gay erotica is so violent or unrealistic. This story was beautiful. Thank you.

Good story, I liked how it developed, but next time maybe reread it closely as there were a few grammatical errors.

But keep it up!

One of the best I have ever read

So hot! Rock hard and ready for part 2!