All Comments on 'Into the Unknowable Ch. 22'

Was this story the product of a madman or genius??

No insult intended.

Truly, for me, a compelling read.

Thank You

Jumping around was a bit much, i didn't see that ending coming,

The ending was as badly transitioned as the rest of the story. There is a difference between foreshadowing and chronologic-epilepsy. There are limits to the ammount of artistic freedom given to the Author of any Work. That limit is based on a sliding scale defined in terms of the author's skill in storytelling and how well the Work, or Collection of Works, hold together with and without the exercising of those rights by the Author. All three arcs are a mess. The plot is nothing more than the same cyber-existencial nonsence that has been done, redone, and over-done with much beter results in FAR TO MANY other stories. The entire series is proof of your need to not Author any future Work.