All Comments on 'A Knife at Lover's Lane'

does she have his baby?

It doesn't matter how many times I read your stories, they always send a chill up my spine!!!!!!

This one was NO exception!!!!

Sabledrake, you are a gift to us. Thank you.

Wow, really well done! Great twist too!

and great twist at the end.

Reminds me of the movie "Grease"

Please could we have one more chapter? Gotta have another round with Spike and find out if she's pregnant. This is a great story with potential. It could be a murder/revenge story or just a nice sweet ending story.

Predictable ending, but well told.

A lot of cliches deftly worked for incongruous but effective comic and erotic effect.

Loved the story. I do wish you would have described how she felt with Jimmy ripped her hymen and also described how big and different each different dick felt as they slide inside her.