by ShelleyWingco
I enjoyed reading your story and look forward to more. Thank you for sharing.
Well written, I support a sequel. Hope her boyfriend doesn't find out. (Seriously).
Her motives for enjoying the plant are obvious, what is the plants' motive. To seed her? To root itself in her flesh? I'm curious.
I enjoyed the story except for the way you kept switching back and forth between "Gemma" and "Miss Cain". Pick one.
I think a sequel would be good, as it seems sort of unfinished. As for her boyfriend finding out, I think it would be an interesting thing to explore and will stop the sequel from being almost a repeat of the first. He might be less angry if he thinks the plant captured her, so maybe he would have to be the one to get it to let her go. Then again...I guess I'll have t wait and see what you decide.
omg , am never going to be able to look @ a hedge/vine/shrub in the same way again.
not sure if you have ruined gardening for me only time will tell , though most likely outcome is i will have a new & deeper appreciation for the plants in my yard.
( already planning where i can plant a wall of Clematis
or maybe Passion flower for next year.)
Yes Please continue this story , Potential here to create a Literotica classic.
spellbound,enthralled & intoxicated by this most imaginative of erotic tales.
only thing i would ask is,
please don't let the plot be influenced by comments/feedback
write it from within , am really looking forward to where you go with this one.
xxxhugsxxx
Please can we have some more.
TwistedOliver
and it read more as a BDSM how-to but a nice effort
It's a very sweet story, Ioved the slow seduction. I vote for a sequel.