All Comments on 'Katie's House Party Exposure'

Wow, I sure hope we see a lot more from this talented writer.

Either a sequel to this or another story altogether... Great start.

OMG..what a great story.Was cought up in the whole thing

So looking forward to your next story.

loved it ?

who/what next ? :)

Ohhhh, yeah!

Very well done. Obviously not your first attempt at creative writing. Keep going

wow, wow, wow!!!!!!!

Why only three stories. We need more from you.

First rate erotica, definitely look forward to more from this author.

Seriously?

That was hot. Well done.

Nicely done ...

Enjoyable and erotic.

However, the story is also quite rushed, particularly towards the end, meaning that there is little time to build tension or generate a sense of anticipation.

The fact that everything descends so quickly and dramatically into a big drunken orgy also lacks credibility. For some people, I suppose this isn't a problem because it is merely a fantasy. But for others, a story that remains plausible and understands how human beings actually interact is preferable.

Certainly a great effort. Odd mistake but nothing that isn't in any of the majority of stories published including probably my own. They were only small like a missed minor word that the mind automatically inserts in any case. Well deserving of 5 stars.

Her character and your writing has definitely inspired mine! Great stuff WrongWriter!

hhmmm, so very erotic and hot,, well written, but seems it descended into an orgy very quickly but maybe thats what kids like today.

living and horny scenes. Descreption of Katies fuck made me wet tu matsurbate

ex-boyfriend Nick into the story. The whore never went back to school anyway, Lucky Nick they call him now.

Such a great story I love rereading. Would love further chapters of this series. Very well written, terrific storyline and great characters

It's a good story, but I think you should have paid more attention to Will, the brother.

His two sisters are naked near him, have sex with him (presumably) in the room, show off in front of his friends and there's no mention of that except to say that he couldn't look them in the eye. Surely you could have done more with that situation.

Otherwise- real good!

My slutty older sister and I partied like this all summer when I was 16! Boats sex drugs and every cock on the lake! Soooooo much fun!

I read this before and just loved it. I just had to read it again.

Excellent. Can’t be the end. She needs some more public exposure.

How Could She Stop This?

How about "NO".

Great story well written

Very well realized story. I once had a girlfriend whom this this would have been a huge fantasy. Hot, a real turn on.

Super hot!

Nothing quite like getting blackmailed into doing something worse than what you are being blackmailed for, like this is all going to remain a secret?

Reminded me of a party I attended. Unfortunately it didn’t go nearly this far. It did bring back pleasant memories and wishful thinking of what might have been

Wow.

Great

Just freaking wow. Where’s the 10* rating button?

Well done!

So fucking hot!

OMG that was hot, had me sweating so bad I had to lower the AC temp and join in getting naked. I wasn't in college for long due to covid but alcohol, weed, pong, darts, cards or pool always made for a fun naked night and missed classes the next morning.

Typical high school/college orgy party now days. Good fantasy story, especially the ending. I think Nick lost, Pat won, Katie will be happy. Will should have taken advantage of the situation and taken some pictures of both sisters for his own enjoyment.

Fun read.... nicely done!

Amazing what a bit of competition will get you to do. A life changing experience. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.