All Comments on 'Woman-In-Charge'

I somply loved the 'spontainiousness' (new word I think) of the act.

Sexy and so cool.

I enjoyed the premise and the build up, however, it was a bit tough to follow the imagery and lets be real, a 23 year have un expected sex with his hot older boss and he last 13 minutes? which also doesn't flow with the fast recovery theme. Keep writing and i will keep reading

"Thirteen minutes' was a bit clinical and made it sound as if someone was using a stopwatch. But it was more than made up for by "Launching into the warm stormy night of her body"

We writers always put a little of ourselve into our work, this comment reveals you as a very sensual person.