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As i nuzzle gently @ the nape of your neck .........

From the startin' lines this is a high- tension Erotic piece ---coup de grace !!! I really bathed in a frission of erotique excitement readin' this 'gain & a again !! Thnx for sharin' : high 5- ed .

The title says it all. Reading this I had a crystal clear picture in my head. I went along for the ride and could almost feel her contented sigh while trembling hands trace as if to not willing to let the feeling go yet.

5 with a sigh

This is really well written, tod. I'd characterize this as a love poem, which for me is a step above "erotic." The words are beautiful.

My only quibble is in stanza 5, lines 4&5. I like word play, but I thought "chase the race" immediately followed by "knead and need" made it feel contrived to me. I'd delete line 4, and then I think line 5 by itself would be more effective.