All Comments on 'My Pussy'

by KatScratchings

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pelegrinopelegrinoalmost 10 years ago

This is a brilliant all containing self description from a lady's point of view.

I admire your straight forward approach and your unambiguous use of words where poetry and science give in harmony the message all clear. You have managed to give in 4 stanzas all that is essential to your subject, leaving out the boring and the common place.

You have great rhyming skills, like a fine lyricist should have. They make perfect music to my ear, and though I hardly have any time to set to music anything but my own pieces, I may have a go on this one (with your permission, of course).

Highly 5ed and recommended in New Poem Recommendations thread !

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 10 years ago

Pelegrino's right, and I loved the word play with the antiquated "where'ere." It just added to the humor of a smart well crafted poem.

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
She'll share it with her friends : the mouth

The ass or twixt the breasts

Where it roams from North to South .......

-----Killer Lines , Kat ! Thnx for sharin' : 5-ed .

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
IF IT FITS

it will be comfortable, TK U MLJ LV NV

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