All Comments on 'Mine'

In this piece, but it drags on a bit, you could have made 2 maybe 3 smaller pieces and had more impact, this is still good, and above is just my opinion,

Thank you.

This is very fine erotic poetry that goes beyond the physical into… I don’t know what!

Very imaginative use of common and rare words in describing almost everything that is particular, personal and individual. But with this use it succeeds in taking me to the more abstract, more general to the holistic... into my own day dreaming. You make one feel a little jealous for your happiness. :)

I enjoyed it very much and give it a 5.

I agree with tod's comment on the structure of it. I also read it as a triptych (3 pieces) but in my mind they form into one with exposition development and conclusion.

Thanks for sharing.

Thank you very much for the 5-star rating! Wow. I am very happy you enjoyed the poem.

Thank you for choosing this as a favorite. :D

I echo Tod's and Pele's sentiments.

There are some wonderful descriptives, many flashes of brilliance in my opinion and even a word I had to get my dictionary out for.

Luuuurved it!

5ed and faved :-)

HoneyAdored, that is so sweet of you!