All Comments on 'The Demon Tattoo'

by Master_Vassago

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
uh yeah it sucked

man that pic was lame--i am sry i even red thru this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
that was shit

well i WAS horny... damn that was bad, u got nerve calling that a pic

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
i like

while i agree that the pic was bad...the story was still good.

gentleman19594ugentleman19594ualmost 20 years ago
generally good but poor finish

The principle idea of the story was good. Parts of the story were well written, others were not so good. The interesting thing was the style seemed to waver between erotic and pornographic. Certainly it had promise for further adventures, but that was cut short by a rather a rushed ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
an interesting story

that was one fucking weird story but really interesting and a great change to all the standard boring bullshit

dragonlord_nzdragonlord_nzover 19 years ago
good story, bad pic

the story and plot were weel thought. ur illustration of the tattoo was not the ideal for ur story

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
My View

Those of you out there who said the choice of picture was "shit," should be ashamed. A tattoo is a peice of art which should be as individual as the person who chooses it, therefore I think we should put our veiws aside and just accept it.

Great story, great pic :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I liked it

Your story would make a good soft porn flick.

Texguy84Texguy84about 19 years ago
Excellent story

Would love to see a series about this fellow and his exploits with his incubus tatoo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good story but...

In your story the lady was wearing both pants and a skirt ..it doesnt work apart from that good work.

The demon pic is a joke ...would be better without it .as the drawing reminds me of a kindergarten drawing ..sorry ..not horny adult style

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
cunt!

Terrible ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Crappy Tattoo

Couldn't you have Google Imaged Demon Tatttoos? that is what I did and I found lots of kick ass ones, in steat of using that cappy shit.It literally drove me crazy, and I just clicked on it.

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