All Comments on 'Her Name Was Alice Pt. 02'

You did a better job of executing your concept for the story. (See my comment about Pt. 01.) Soiled ladies underwear really isn't my particular kink but I am a fan of good writing. Keep working at it. I expect you'll get better at it if you sincerely try.

It was so arousing for women to think that our marked underwear can raise such desires. I am sure Part 3 will be even better.

I have given it 5 out of 5.