All Comments on 'The Club'

Love to-be supporter like Jim, would love to supporter of CLUB even with out wife if possible. Love to-do CLEAN-UP on all. To eat pussy full of 24+ loads of cum would be great, have her sit on my face and make me do CLEAN-UP GREAT.

what was the theme oh yes it was I pay to have my wife a whore, at least with a good detective he can get the goods on her and Gayle and end the nightmare these women have placed themselves in

That's one of the supreme problems with stories like this. It just about what's best for the wife. If what's best for him is addressed at all is a contrivance that what's best for him is giving in to every little thing for her. In other words, a cliché.

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Why open stories such as this? It’s in the hope that I will find SOME intelligence, SOME effort, something besides the same clichés strung together. Once again, that search was fruitless.

I do enjoy a good cuckold story.

However, this is not one of them. The build up leads to very little erotic material.

Too little heterosexual sex is described and too much sissy cum eating and cock sucking takes over the story.

Also, I have read a similar story premise written and published here by author KarenKay called the Black Stable Club.

Well done. Hope theres a sequel. Good detailing.

I like your story and you are getting your details right. I've been there and the party you describe is very much to my liking. Can't wait for next chapter. xoxo Bev

my wife and i loved this one, so close to things we have enjoyed the last few

years , so much bbc for bothof us

Why do guy withno name keep complainin about intereacial stories

QUIT READING GO AWAY

Cuckold is hooked on creampie and cock sucking. His little clit is hard and leaking. At next party let the other more well hung supporters fuck and breed Jims tight pussy as Members watch, laugh, and enjoy his bottom getting bred. Have another bottom boy eat him clean for the next cuckold to fuck his pussy. Also Jim should be milked dry with no orgasm. Just pissing out his goo. Then put Jim in chastity and make him lick and suck up his own goo and swallow. He will then be a fully trained bottom cuckold and be ready for the stud members who want to sample his bottom pussy. Ignore the trolls. Very good start to this tale.

10/10 would read again

my favourite part was the batroom. It sounds so coooolll!!! I wish someone would shoot their load down my tharoat. Like Jerome. He sounds dreamy. So hot. OMG. Would fuck.

This describes absolute heaven for a bi wimp cocksucker like me!

I enjoyed elements of it but there was too much humiliation and not enough of action for my taste.

Thanks though. It was still enjoyable.

The only thing missing from this story is for Holly to be off of birth control and then be ovulating during the party so she can have a black baby in her white belly.

Probably my favorite story to jerk to, wish I had a few heavy loads to clean from a used pussy

Loved this story can't wait for ch2 where Jim gets promoted to white panties ch3 black panties & maybe a ch4 where Jim is promoted to a PA with a French maid uniform make it sooooon PLEASE

and this could be a great way for them to enjoy a variety of cocks and cunts, can't get too excited about sucking cocks tho

I've read some crap in my life but this takes some beating. BTW I'm a lover of interracial cuck stories. Take some lessons off Jaycuck or Xleglover

Reminded me very much of 'The Circle of Cuckolds' but it was a good story in its own right.

You collected the usual amount of haters, sad twats!

I gave it 5 Stars because it deserved it.

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You are a great writer!

Please write more interracial femdom stories!

The Club 2 would amazing : )

Wonderful story.

These cuckold club tales always get me.

An excellent and completely over the top ending. Lucky Jim eats so much sperm and Jerome (great name!) Wants to move in and will allow Jimmy boi to sleep at the foot of the bed.

Perfect cucking

you should suck your dad cock also loser wimp

Started off very well but got a little 'lost, 'thin in the middle perhaps too much about Jim and not enough about Holly. Just my own preference. I gave it a four.

THE best !

They should have an LW category for sick shit

Love cuck stories but not when the husband's are humiliated to sucking cocks.

I love all these critics who have never written a story