by cool_whisper
I liked how the intensity increased. Well done, young lady.
I appreciate the feedback and thank you for the smile it brought.
Right to the limit in this, normally when a poem repeats so often I can't finish reading which is sad sometimes because there may be good stuff that I miss, but the rhyme and rhythm drive this at a pace that I didn't get a chance to turn off, the end of line break adds a pause before the beat pushes on again. Thanks for getting me to the end :-)