by CeliaisAliena
well done
good phrasing, word choice
Unseen, unnamed, atomic--
Your future lover, nemesis, anonymous
ending is a little too (anti?)climatic?
5ed
I had to reference back to the title
delicious snowball of doom, definitely caught my attention,
didn't like the ending, but it does tie in with snowball, solid write,
a delicious pulse of sibilance throughout, like the swish of nanoseconds being brushed aside till the inevitable impact
so much going on with the phrasing it was a delight for me to read. thankyou.
in inimitable ovals, glitter-sprung
very nice