All Comments on 'Comet'

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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
very well

well done

good phrasing, word choice

Unseen, unnamed, atomic--

Your future lover, nemesis, anonymous

ending is a little too (anti?)climatic?

5ed

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
interesting

I had to reference back to the title

delicious snowball of doom, definitely caught my attention,

didn't like the ending, but it does tie in with snowball, solid write,

buttersbuttersalmost 10 years ago
oh i really llike this

a delicious pulse of sibilance throughout, like the swish of nanoseconds being brushed aside till the inevitable impact

so much going on with the phrasing it was a delight for me to read. thankyou.

in inimitable ovals, glitter-sprung

very nice

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