All Comments on 'Hold Me Take Me Bind Me Make Me'

by bellefleure

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TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Not bad

I almost didn't read because of the title. Much better than I expected.

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
as with your last poem

Your sense of rhyme and rhythm is impeccable. A few cliches very hard to avoid in erotic poetry, but all in all worthy of a 4.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
very good

you're one of the best authors on lit.

tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
A BINDING A DAY

makes the hotel staff merry. TK U MLJ LV NV

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