All Comments on 'An Early Morning Intrusion'

i really hope you continue this story

A perfect combination of Awww and oh yeah baby!

Sorry to disagree, but a bit boring. Not very erotic either

I found this very refreshing! You write in a completely different style to me - I really enjoyed his blow by blow thought process.

I don't quite care enough about the characters yet to demand a second part but if you did write one I would definitely read it.

V. Good. :)