All Comments on 'Submitting to Lisa'

Hope you continue this story or write another one along similar lines. I love the stern but playful attitude of the lady in this story.

This is a lovely start to what I hope will be a long story of brian's submission to Lisa.

Thank you for the very nice comments so far. This is a story I wrote some time ago. I've been meaning to write a follow up to it for some time now and will be doing so very shortly. Lisa has plans for her slave.

Have any worse words every been written. Even for fiction this was simply god awful.

More please! That's all I can say, it's such a good start! :3