All Comments on 'Who's in Charge? Pt. 05'

This was good but you seem stalled and maybe unsure which way to take this story. I felt like you were trying to get a certain amount of words into this ....like a homework assignment. I look forward to more but hope you take it where I think you want to and not succumb to pressure from others as to how it SHOULD be.

4 stars.

I like this story a lot i hope you keep going with it.

You seem to have a good story going and I hope you keep it going. It was very entertaining and well constructed. Keep it alive.

I just finished reading all 5 parts. WOW. I came like 4 times as I read it. It is fantastic. So hot and depraved but also so real. I remember when My grandma would visit and stay with my mom, dad and me. Dad was so grumpy and stressed. I could just imagine him doing grandma. So hot. Cant wait for the next chapters.

My wife, and I get along very well. Everyone know she in charge of the house. But she knows I am in charge in the bed room. It's a big turn on for me when she acting in charge in the kitchen, but I can smell the oil we use for anal sex coming from between her ass cheeks! Knowing my dick will be between her ass cheeks before the night is done! Knowing she already for a good ass fucking! We both look at each other knowing what going to happen later!