All Comments on 'Werewolves and Indians Ch. 11'

I really would like to know what you think of this chapter. Please feel free to share your thoughts. Or even tell me where you think the story should go. Thank you for reading and voting. I am working on Time for Truth right now, but will write chapter 12 soon.

It was good to see all the characters plodding along, enjoying life being happy for a change, especially with what happened before with Lionel.

Please don't drag out the search for Lionel's daughter too long, or it could get a bit monotonous. All in all, I liked this chapter a lot. Roll on chapter 12. :)

Five Stars

i dont see daniel just giving up when she gets back to the office.

I hope Daniel doesn't make a nusiance of himself when they return home. It would be cool if Jacob could go back with Sunnet but he would want to stay with his pack to help rebuild. Ja'Mal need to encourage Jacob to go with Sunnet. Jacob would go out of his mind wondering about Daniel trying to get with his mate.

Awaiting the next chapter Madam.

I've enjoyed the story but was put off by the first scene with Kerri and Ja'mal. While she did enjoy it in the end, she said no several times with reasonable reason and her mate just kept pushing it. I didn't get a my love and desire for you is so great vibe , but an I don't care what you want I want to get off now vibe from it. Poorly done for a mate. He could have taken care of her as she wanted at that point and been rewarded ten-fold the next time. Not happy with him.

how about going back to Ja'mals old pack? or fast forwarding a few years and having the Alphas child(ren) coming in contact with the old pack? it could be a saga all by itself. there seems to be plenty of room for this story to evolve. being as there are so many plot threads you didn't/haven't touched on yet. but it's been a good read, keep up the good work.

I never want it to end. Seriously. I so want this to be a full length book so I could bug you to make it a series. The story is perfect for a series. Still have the usual suggestion about finding an editor and proofreader, but that does not have anything to do with the fact that this story is so wonderful that it deserves a full length book to showcase it.

you are very good at the sentimental stuff . I'm lovin' it .

Stephen J

I’m really enjoying this story! Please keep writing, and I’ll keep reading.