All Comments on 'Stranger on the Beach'

Read both of your entries. You're a natural. RU sure you're straight ? Ummm !

What an erotic story. And very touching. Stuff that dreams are made of. Please keep writing.

Striking imagery and a stirring description of the full-bodied vision who appears in the moonlight. Passionate and mysterious, two elements which lift this above the run-of-the-mill tales of a sudden, unexpected seduction. No names but a wonderful roll in the sand with a teasing, hopeful finale.

Anonymous; yes, pretty much. Horney47; thank you I plan on it. JWren; thank you for the critique, I like writing different, no name stories. You all make me smile, thank you for reading my little story.

I enjoyed your story. Very detailed.

I felt this story, I became the guy on the beach. This is one of the very best short erotica stories I've ever read. 5 stars

Where is number 2 🙈 Straight 5stars I love great details we don't get lost...

I loved it!! Absolutely loved the details, all the imagery, incredible piece!!

Hello from Greece! So romantic story! So sensual! However, no story actor did think of condom use? Sex play is nice! :)

Sincerely,

Elias Tsolis

Perhaps my favorite story of all. She is perfect. She is my dream.