All Comments on 'Metamorphosis'

This could of easily fit into romance. I have a 53 year old retired for who knows how long neighbor lady that wears worn out jeans and old tee shirts all the time and usually has her hair up in a hat. She shocked everyone a while back at another neighbors wedding when she showed up looking like a million dollars. She had a good laugh at all of the neighbors staring at her and the two widowers who kept trying to keep her attention.

Beautifully written, Great story line. Outstanding sex scenes. Thank you!

Nice to read a story with great lovemaking, respect, and romance all in one. We women all need a Todd in our lives.

A nice story, I liked it.

Beautiful story. Beautiful writing. Beautiful sex. Thank you,

Nicely done in every respect. Loved it!

Wonderful story. Nice plot, good sex and some romance. Perfect

Beautifully writen. I wish Misty and Todd all the best!

I'm taking my time. Reading your stories spaced out for maximum enjoyment.

Nicely done. Thoughtful, building character traits, slightly suspenseful, but always making sense.

You're one of my favorite authors.

incredible imagination and rare talent. Loved this story.

I really enjoyed this story

Nice to read a really five star romance. Well written, good character development, and a great ending.

Thanks

SUPERB--best I have read in a while, I really like what you create-

Thanks,

Sam

It was a very well written "Erotic Coupling" story and a "Romance" to...I love thoes!

Satisfyingly juicy!....Thanks!

Very nice and we'll written. Five stars cause that all I can give!

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!

If she really hadn’t orgasmed ever with regular intercourse then she wouldn’t have been able to so easily (Within one minute? Yeah, right!) with him. Just wasn’t gonna happen. Nice little fantasy, but unrealistic. Knocked down the score by one star, unfortunately.

Very nice, I liked this story very much. No nits to pick for me. It was nice to see Marlene eat a little crow.

Approved. Ms was not what she seemed . Pleasingly.

Smooth writing but a wee tiddle short of character development.