All Comments on 'Breaking the Rule'

I think this story has interesting potential good read

Really like where this is heading. Please don't make us wait for the next one.

I like it, but why did she not even ask about the bond. I hope next chapter explains. This could turn into a really amazing story.

It sure has the potential of becoming a good read.. I certainly felt all the emotions of the character. And kitty cat made me laugh as well.. U r good.

That kitty kat is funny as hell I love it

Typically, I am not into lesbian erotica, but this story has gripped my attention! Please continue! It's a great start to what will hopefully be an excellent series.

quite good, but im dissappointed that this appears to be the end. it could go far.

It's a very interesting story it would be a shame to end it here

An interesting setting and lots of interesting ideas, but I didn't much like the Catherine character as presented so I wouldn't bother reading a sequel.

Great start, shame you never continued, don't suppose you've considered continuing?