All Comments on 'Bull Feathers & Chocolate'

I love how you twist and turn a phrase.

This poem, like many of yours, takes me on a ride to a destination I never can anticipate. I get lost in your poetry. I stumble into walls, tear apart words and phrases that echo confounding reverberations I can’t quite place-- while carefully placed silences glimmer with hints. For Instance, I love how the reader is dropped into the work as if from a vacuum; the poem roars ahead, while my mind is lost in space. I read and listen for traditional markers, but am left with the directions of my own imagination... and the desire to come back to it. Great work!

Great pseudonym. Thank you for your feedback; I'm flattered. I may have some words for your work too. :)