All Comments on 'There Must Be a Mistake Ch. 05'

I was going to comment after Ch. 04 that, while I loved the dialogue in the first couple of chapters, it was getting really tedious by Ch. 04, as neither the relationships nor the dialogue showed any maturing or progression. However, with this chapter, I think I do sense maturing of the relationships and at least some of the dialogue. This is important, as it reflects character development. Not sure why there are no comments - this is an interesting and fun series.

It's not me, but find him/her. You are badly in need. See if you can figure out then/than on your own. This has been a fascinating story, repititous in spots, but fun. Don't kill the computer. Keep up the good work.

Those guys have stopped their complaints in the other parts.

And should one of them read this: Chill down, have a cookie and try not to leave your mental diarrhea at the bottom of a great story with *some* typos...

Also if you don't like a story just leave it and read another one.

There are too many digs at negative comments of readers who do not like parts of the story. While these comments should be decent or constructive an author cannot disregard emotional critiques. Such comments only show that the reader is invested in the story and only help improve the writing. There is an old adage that all feedback is constructive if the recipient is open to introspection. The author invests a part of herself/himself and the development of the story and characters only helps broaden the outlook and experiences of the author. It's part of growing both as a person and as a writer

There must be a mistake, because after Part 1, I wrote that this story made me cry and laugh. It continued in the same style and suddenly the banter, the unceasing arguments and the non-stop verbal harassment of the main characters got to me. But the story has speed and its weirdness is intriguing. I will keep on reading ...

Postscript and Post-Postscript

But what does your last S mean?

Anywho

Enjoying the story so far keep up the good work :)

You need a Roz to do a proof reading. As every so often, you have a wrong word,e.g. been instead of be. The misspelling of words such as colour, we will let you off as the the story is set in the USA and they do not write in English!

Basic errors that should be picked up at proof reading stage, no good relying on Word or whatever to check spelling if it's not the correct word. But amazing story telling and long instalments each time so an enormous amount of effort has been expended writing this. Still t ⛤

I'm getting so very tired saying I love your story, characters and humor!

This sorry is just too good

Good story but I feel Even and the Jennifer meeting is a bit too believable. If the boy has a high IQ I will have to shoot my boots.