All Comments on 'What Really Makes A Scientist Mad Ch. 01'

by Bardoc93

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I'm not sure what the point is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting build up

If this actually becomes a full fleshed story then it might prove to be amazing. It certainly had me immersed enough to want to see this continue.

luther78luther78over 9 years ago

Great start. I am looking forward to more chapters of this story.

TwistedwriterTwistedwriterover 9 years ago
Where are you going with this?

This isn't even a full chapter. Just started to get interested in the idea when it was over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice intro

Good intro , looks like it will build up to be a very good story . Looking forward to reading further chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very nice beginning!

Till here I liked it A LOT.

Please go on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
too short. Not really a complete thought here.

It needs to be much more developed to be a complete chapter. We don't really know anything about what is going on. why is the girl even in the story?

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