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For the Love of Botany Ch. 3

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by Anonymous09/08/07

excellent

exce,llent

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by Anonymous04/19/08

Good, but frequent structural errors

So far, I'm liking the series just enough to continue reading each part. Inconsistency and grammatical errors are really what are bugging me and detracting from the overall attention that I pay to the story. For example, the botanist was Sanchez in ch.1 but was referred to as Chavez in ch. 3. For grammatical errors, shorthand abbreviations (such as b/t for "between" and 2 for "to"), and the frequent lack of commas and punctuation where there should be one, cut my attention span dramatically.

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by Anonymous10/07/08

Please take English class again.

Please take English class again.

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