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PolyLvralmost 10 years agoNot bad.
You can tell a story but... it's too short. Each chapter should be longer. There's too little substance in such a short piece.
arrowglassalmost 10 years agoNot sure what to rate this?
I thought I would like this story anticipating it was building...but these short story snippets are losing my interest. Give the chapters some more substance and include a prelude to the next one.
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