All Comments on 'Born Into Darkness Ch. 01'

by wingedangel324

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Its long but THAT'S ALL you post for chapter 1?! I won't be coming back to read more if they're ALL going to be so short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Can't Please Everyone

I liked it, more plz!

mydarknessmydarknessover 9 years ago
good start but needs more

Good start but more character description and background is needed. Keep going you have a good start now just elaborate more on characters and descriptions of environment and details in general.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hopefully original.

Hope the chapters are much longer and characters are more fleshed out. I also hope that these characters are original and not pale imitations of Sherilyn Kenyon's world based in New Orleans and favoring leather garments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great start

You've got me and I really want to read more I hope you give us the next chapter and soon. Also In my oppinon it would be better if they were a bit longer. Good luck xxx

wingedangel324wingedangel324over 9 years agoAuthor
Readers

Hola guys,

Don't worry they get longer, and as for Kenyon (my favorite author) i took some of her brilliant ideas such as the daimons and the bayou and how he was as a general in greece but everything else is mine. Thank you so much for your input.

-Angel Out <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
So interesting!

This is really good, goofy, sexy and above all else unique!

KikoFishKikoFishover 9 years ago
Nice! This got me hooked!

@>@

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

I really enjoyed it a few things from someone who has lived in New Orleans cafe du monde never closes and the cathedral closes around six in the afternoon also the cathedral doesn't have any gargoyles it has a large jesus statue in the back courtyard that is just as creepy at night.

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