All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

Wonderfully written really enjoyed that!

Awesome story, would love a sequel!

you have a gift. I really want Mattie to be naked in public (where she's not supposed to be)

Excellent story, well written, based on an idea that is just slightly different. Definitely needs the sequel. If you want to improve, change chaise lounge to chaise longue ( just means long chair in French), and watch the reader doesn't lose track of your multiple characters.

Thanks

Exciting, but part of me wanted Bob to be the owner and invite her to stay there with him. I was hoping they had made a connection. The romantic in me. :)

Great story I am so wet now

Without a doubt one of my favourites so far on this site - excellent work!

i read it as a story and loved it, no critgue apart from i need to read a part 2. made me nice and wet...lol

I have read many of your stories, and I think I will re-visit this one soon. A joy!

for me as a reader, and for her.

I can't help thinking about sipping a libation, adding to the lubrication, and savouring the liberation.

One of the top stories on this site. Thank You

Shame there is no 10star rating to select.. :-)

I love the exhibitionism and the sex. It's nice to see someone open up and start enjoying life.

First class :)

I figured out my exhibitionist bent when baggy cargo pants became popular.During the summer I wore them commando to allow for ventilation.Got called a few times for the trouser snake trying to escape.Although not overly endowed I got a few compliments and date offers.Things that make you go hmmm.Started manscaping (not a term back then) and tanning and the smiles and offers doubled.