All Comments on 'J'ai Envie de Toi'

Quite possibly the most sensual story I've ever read. Beautiful! OMG, thank you.

...magnificient. I, too, stand in awe of your rhapsodic lyricism.

Just beautiful and sensitive. (nothing more to add)

Simply stunning.

also will we see the end of i'd go gay for you? that series is great.

Merveilleux!

Wonderful yet natural dialogue, even when expressing nervous flirting. Very believable and realistic. The part where Red shares her fantasy via video on her phone was fantastic. And as true with good writing, the writing was not noticeable because I as in the story. Five stars.

I agree with DonnaBeck's comment wholeheartedly. This is a fantastic story. Sensual, erotic, realistic and touching. Many thanks for gifting us with a beautiful tale.

Gentle tale of attraction and obsession. Flirting and teasing allied to all the doubts and uncertainties, builds the frustration to splendid erotic levels. How does it end? Will we ever find out, Cathy?

That is the hottest buildup of flirting I've ever read. I know you're finishing this story, right?

You are one of my five favourite writer's on here and it's small but as I said I know from your previous work you know better. But 'back leg muscles' How many legs does she have? Four legged animals have front and back legs, most humans I know have only two. Maybe 'back of leg' was what you meant. Other than that love this one as I do all other stories from you.

Far too much silly build up. A little is fine but this was over the top.

I love the build up. Keep it this way :)

so I will,,,

please please finish this wonderfully romantic tale. I'm waiting with bated breath

Absolutely perfect. The right amount of build up and left us wanting more. Brava!

I enjoy you as a writer because you know how to build up the chemistry between your characters, while always leaving your reader wanting more. Well done :)

Reading something like this on Literotica is a breath of fresh air.

BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great tale of flirtation, bravo bi_cathy.

Wow this author is good another 5*

Very stylish!

But ended MUCH too soon.

What a glorious tale. No need for the consummation, a perfect ending.

Superb, elegant but unconsummated story! Brave

As you say, so lyrical, love the style but glad that you now are going for just a bit more"content". Having just discovered you I'm reading you back to back which leaves me feeling something is lacking. Says as much about me as it does about you so certainly don't stop the wonderful use of language and pace. Thanks

Jesus, you are good at build-ups!

i got the ick when she said nip clit LOL

bi_cathy, don’t you get tired and bored with repeatedly writing the best stories on Literotica? Lol

Fear, uncertainty, lust and laughter! And a wingman that is really there for you!

Such a good story!