by _alover
Not bad Alittle rushed but keep writing. I want to be your uncles friend! Lol
Who cares about grammar and punctuation: I wish my niece would do that to meβ¦..
I'm wanking off now thank you _alover
Considering she's never had sex before, I'd say she's done a pretty good job, seriously it's hurtful and mean. She's also 18. I love the story, I hope you write more
I like the premise, but wish that you had taken your time and developed things a bit... like creating an environment to engender a strong loving bond between the two, before they began to experiment with the merging of the emotional, sensual, and erotically physical. It's not a bad story, in fact has the potential for being a classic, were it not so abrupt <smile>. Of course, if you were merely going for a quick little stroke story, congratulations, you attained your goal.
Like some others, I would probably enjoy being your uncle, though in my case it would likely have to be 'great uncle' <laughing>. I would enjoy reading more of your stories, if you would see fit to notify me as they come in to Literotica.
Thank you for this one,
-Wylde
me and my uncle "Dan" fucked and sucked all over my aunt's newly purchased second-hand salon shoppe. Thanx _alover, for bringing the memories back!!
I'm 18 so I know how it is.I may not be a.virgin no more but u did good! I really hope u write more!
Very hot! I have a niece that has helped me in my garage I can only imagine that she is as hot as you! Give us more of this tastie little minx!
So hot, I wish my uncle would fuck me like this! I'm so hot so hot reading this, please write more like this!
As a woman I'll say, don't let anyone say you're a prude or something because you're a virgin, they're hating because they aren't &/or gave it up to an asshole. Lol. Here's hoping your first time is hot & you cum at least 3 times. πππ Knowing your body & how you like to be pleasured is key.
Love it. Awesome π. My niece is 20 & looks like cameron diaz. I sure wish she would come visit me more often especially when I'm all alone.