by loverofFUN
Of course, we all know there would be sex at the end of this story but the slow gentle build-up, the sexy frolics of the 4 drunken girls, and then the intimacy between the two were so beautifully done - perfect pace, sexy little references, steamier dialogue and activities - I was completely turned on from the start. Thank-you!
I agree with every thing Anonymous said and I hope you do give us a second chapter or more. Loved it
I love the slow tease with all the innocent flirtations. This absolutely needs a continuation. Pretty please, with sugar on top??
Please continue. Rubbing of different things. Is good for you. Maybe all four girls do a rub off.
This made me soo horny and wet. I love tits and that tit sucking made my clit beg to be rubbed
That was incredibly hot!!!! I mean, the build up and the flirting built such a nice sexual tension, I was soooo wet by the time it got around to the "climax". I'll be using this to get to my own climax tonight! Please, please, please write a part two!
Now the other two girls need to wake up and join in and suck and lick each other. !
Just like Bolero - starts quietly and then before you know it, you are climaxing. Build up is intense, believable. Keep it up.
One of the best that I have read. The story flowed smoothly and I hope you have a continuation in mind.
Great story until you lost me at Gina having to work? Candy mouth turned me on, ready for the endless possibilities of last whoorah before BEFORE their lives and responsibilities of work and school.
I look forward to added chapters? I feel like I started a book, and run into lost pages.
From weekend to work= Chubb blown
Though I kinda knew where this might be going, loved the subtleties of your story. Hot, sexy, gentle without the harsh or negative language.
Well done!!
The story flows perfectly. Capturing the best part of the sexual exploration. Thanks for the story.
One of the hottest stories ever -- I'm trembling -- fingers shaking, breathing off - as I try to write this comment! Thank you so much, Linda
That made me so wet like the first time with my best friend.
Sweet story, but your protagonist seems a bit selfish-- she's happy (very happy!) to receive, but doesn't give much in return.
My first experience with another girl was with my best friend in high school. That's how it all starts, experimenting and "helping" each other feel good... Nicely written, believable story!
Wonderfully descriptive, slow and delicious as is her stories, this Is my second. As they got very wet, I got very hard , as I visualize her totally arousing sensual stories, thanks again creative, erotic brilliance, it becomes a fine art as the fingers and lips indulge in their pleasures!! Tasting fingers is so Hot!!
"Buzzed" - under the influence that is. Another abuse story camouflaged as experimenting.