All Comments on 'A Friend Indeed'

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spredmspredmover 9 years ago
Sensual

Great story so sensual

FlexibilityFlexibilityover 9 years ago
Beautifully Done

Of course, we all know there would be sex at the end of this story but the slow gentle build-up, the sexy frolics of the 4 drunken girls, and then the intimacy between the two were so beautifully done - perfect pace, sexy little references, steamier dialogue and activities - I was completely turned on from the start. Thank-you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Try it!

Beautiful and sensuous - thank you.

wibitriwibitriover 9 years ago
The night isn't over yet!

Please God let there be a chapter 2!

plumberdonplumberdonover 9 years ago
Beautiful

I agree with every thing Anonymous said and I hope you do give us a second chapter or more. Loved it

NC22371NC22371over 9 years ago
Ummm

I love the slow tease with all the innocent flirtations. This absolutely needs a continuation. Pretty please, with sugar on top??

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
rubbing is good

Please continue. Rubbing of different things. Is good for you. Maybe all four girls do a rub off.

nettie287484nettie287484over 9 years ago
SO HOT

This made me soo horny and wet. I love tits and that tit sucking made my clit beg to be rubbed

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

That was incredibly hot!!!! I mean, the build up and the flirting built such a nice sexual tension, I was soooo wet by the time it got around to the "climax". I'll be using this to get to my own climax tonight! Please, please, please write a part two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Damn Sexy

Now the other two girls need to wake up and join in and suck and lick each other. !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bolero

Just like Bolero - starts quietly and then before you know it, you are climaxing. Build up is intense, believable. Keep it up.

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillover 9 years ago
Yes!

One of the best that I have read. The story flowed smoothly and I hope you have a continuation in mind.

Charlotte35fCharlotte35fover 9 years ago
yum!

So lovely. Thank you for turning me on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
8am

Great story until you lost me at Gina having to work? Candy mouth turned me on, ready for the endless possibilities of last whoorah before BEFORE their lives and responsibilities of work and school.

I look forward to added chapters? I feel like I started a book, and run into lost pages.

From weekend to work= Chubb blown

Reader_to_WriterReader_to_Writerover 9 years ago
Great story!

Though I kinda knew where this might be going, loved the subtleties of your story. Hot, sexy, gentle without the harsh or negative language.

Well done!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice flow

The story flows perfectly. Capturing the best part of the sexual exploration. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Oh so very hot!!

linda1234linda1234over 8 years ago
omg

One of the hottest stories ever -- I'm trembling -- fingers shaking, breathing off - as I try to write this comment! Thank you so much, Linda

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervover 8 years ago
wonderful

Loved it! And the candy mouth story was hot also!

pinkroguepinkrogueabout 7 years ago
Wow. Well written

That made me so wet like the first time with my best friend.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Sweet, but one-sided

Sweet story, but your protagonist seems a bit selfish-- she's happy (very happy!) to receive, but doesn't give much in return.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Aaah, high school...

My first experience with another girl was with my best friend in high school. That's how it all starts, experimenting and "helping" each other feel good... Nicely written, believable story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I would love another story like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderfully descriptive, slow and delicious as is her stories, this Is my second. As they got very wet, I got very hard , as I visualize her totally arousing sensual stories, thanks again creative, erotic brilliance, it becomes a fine art as the fingers and lips indulge in their pleasures!! Tasting fingers is so Hot!!

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

Sweet, delicious, naughty, fun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hot Story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This made me so hot i feel like experimenting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"Buzzed" - under the influence that is. Another abuse story camouflaged as experimenting.

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