All Comments on 'A Broken Family Ch. 07'

by HollyBranch

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
cant wait

I can't wait for the next chapter! Love this series please let her and Alex be together while camping please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love your style of writing

I've been checking for updates everyday and when I saw A Broken Family 07 my eyes lit up. You have a great style of writing and I love how you don't rush the story I can't wait for chapter 08, I want to see how JT and Holly's relationship progresses and how Alex and Holly connect on the camping trip. All in all I would like to see Holly give her vaginal virginity to JT but I know that is up to you the writer. You are truely an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good writing but

Good writing, but you killed it for me when you allowed the male whore of the family to have her first and not the one that she appears to want to really be with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Poor Eli!

Please just figure out a way for all of them to be ok. I know it's probably impossible because they are all in love with her. It would just nice to have a happy ending every now and then. Real like definitely falls short so maybe you could help me. Fingers crossed.

PapaKilo14PapaKilo14over 9 years ago
Keep it up!

Love the story so far keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
AMAZING!

I love the story, please try to give us a little of happiness giving us more of this amazing story, and please try to write the chapters a little longer. It crazy how obsessed with this story i am.

Hope you upload soon, ADIOS

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bad feeling

I have a bad feeling that JT or Alex will find out about the other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love it

Please upload next chapter soon! I can't wait for this steamy camping trip. Your story has me hooked! When will chapter 8 be up? And will it be longer?

HollyBranchHollyBranchover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 8

It will be up sometimes this week. I typically upload 10-25 pages from Microsoft Word; I can't control how long it appears on here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hooked

I absolutely adore this series and check daily for a new set... I hope that its a very long series. The build up is awesome and never fails to get me hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keeps Getting Better & Better!!!!!!!!

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arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
HOT

I wish you would have spent some time on Holly and JT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good to see

Im glad to see Holly is breaking down the uptight Alex's over-protectiveness. Cant be denied!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Update soon please

I've been checking for updates everyday and when I saw A Ch 07 my eyes lit up. You have a great style of writing and I love how you don't rush the story I can't wait for chapter 08, I want to see how JT and Holly's relationship progresses and how Alex and Holly connect on the camping trip. All in all I would like to see Holly give her vaginal virginity to JT cuz I prefer him and think he needs her more but I know that is up to you the writer. You are truly an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more stories from you. I. Can't wait to see the reactions when JT and Alex find out about the other DRAMA . Though I can see why she's going to 2 brother it's the best of both worlds romantic from 1 and rough and ready from the other. Update soon please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
so good!

when I started reading i just wanted the hot and steamy stuff to happen but I'm totally loving the drawn out tension between them. Great writing, can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Anxiously waiting

I love the series and can't wait until you post part 8. Any idea when?

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