All Comments on 'From Jenny to Mei Ch. 06'

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SybawriteSybawriteover 9 years ago
Awesome ending

Getting better with each chapter!

Deimos1Deimos1over 9 years ago
So good

Your story gets better with each chapter. I am enjoying it immensely.

ballznall60ballznall60over 9 years ago
Superb!

Just fabulous. Erotica at its best.

virtual_lovervirtual_loverover 9 years ago
Envious

I am really envious of your ability.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

Have read dozens, if not more than a hundred stories here, but yours has to be the best! You have a real talent here! Amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
When Is She Cumming?

Fabulous work once again. I'm REALLY looking forward to what's cumming next. Will Philip survive? I guess he will but he'll probably need a defibrillator.

Great dialogue - again.

dan_kildalldan_kildallalmost 9 years ago
Still loving the series

I love how this chapter reinforced the counting and that she came at forty-four again.

When I got to this line I actually gasped out loud: "Suck your come out of my ass and spit it in my mouth."

WOW! Ummm, Mei Chun is my kinda girl. :) I can't wait to continue reading. I wish there were more hours in the day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it...

but better editor(s) needed. Defiantly/definitely, complement/compliment, others...they're all valid words, but with different meanings. Editors seemingly unable to spot the glaringly wrong ones in use. More anal, please!

Jrbradford17Jrbradford17over 4 years ago
WOW!!!

In a million years I would have never thought I would understand or enjoy a sexual story like this... AsianToy you have made me think of mind controlled sex in a whole different way. I can’t wait to read more as I feel I’m learning with Mei Chun.

zammzammabout 2 months ago

Amazing, but that dialogue between Philip and Sarah has me worried. I'm thinking Philip really loves Sarah and he's using Mei. If this turns out to be true, Phil is one scumbag piece of shit. I will continue reading

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I've hit the mother of all writer's blocks. Not that I don't write, I do, maybe too much. The issue is that I get to a point in a story and can't find the motivation to work through the issues. The harder I work and the more I press myself the more my passion is sapped and ...

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