All Comments on 'The Phone Call'

Sorry to say, but I would be remiss if I didn't, this story doesn't have any redeeming qualities than I can discern.

Not the call a parent wants to get. A serious talking to is due here.

I thought the concept had great potential...and may even be some storyline I may pursue at some point, but unfortunately this story seemed more like a vindictive rant than having any actual 'realism' or entertaining drawn out plot.

I'm not saying to give it up, but passing the story by an editor or three may gain you some experience and pointers on playing out the story to be a bit more involved...

must be on the list of worst calls a parent could get...