All Comments on 'Smolder'

Excellent job....hot, intense....as most good fantasies are.

Only saw one oops concerning the candle. When you have her change position to her back, you have a few sentences where the candle is magically already in her ass. Then it disappears to reappear a little later. Other than that, well done

Well, Vei1edthreat, for a non-writer, this was quite some story. Don't sell yourself short -- there are always plenty of people who love to do just that, so don't give in now you are winning!

Not perfect -- what ever is -- but a damned fine story. Thank you for posting it for us and congratulations on your first story. More like it, please and have five stars with my best wishes.

Mel_pomene,

Thanks for the warm thoughts (and the stars), Mel. I appreciate the encouragement. I'm not sure if there are anymore stories rattling around in my noggin, but I'll be happy to share if something should pop up!

BearsLady,

Thanks for the continuity catch, as well as your words. I really appreciate it! Edit to fix, has already been submitted.

You have written a wonderfuly captivatingly sensual fantasy. I hope you continue your writing because you are phenomenally good.