All Comments on 'Moonlit Tenderness'

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Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 9 years ago
An important stage in life well defined

Nicely done, very nicely done indeed. Fine Wordsmithing.

justBrandyjustBrandyover 9 years agoAuthor
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Many thanks kind sir. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 9 years ago
THANKS

You have just shown how a story can be sexy, yet not pornographic. If you aren't old, you sure have a good grasp of how it is for the senior set. *****

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Uplifting

A gentle and surprising union. Love never sees the blemishes, the extra weight or stretch marks. And love never ceases to amaze, even for empty nesters. Nicely paced short passage which lifts the heart and flesh.

justBrandyjustBrandyover 9 years agoAuthor
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Thecarolinadreamer; thank you, and while I am at the age of being an empty nester I will never be old ;). JWren; it is true, love doesn't see blemishes, which I am thankful for. Again thank you both for enjoying and commenting on my little story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Excellent.

hunterdonmalehunterdonmaleover 9 years ago

Hubby is a lucky man, and you are an excellent writer. I look forward to reading al of your posts.

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I am just me. Wife, mother, and sometimes smartass. I love camping, reading, and recently trying my hand at writing naughty little stories. Any critiques and suggestions you care to share with me are welcomed. I am sorry but I tend to reply only to public comments, althoug...