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tazz317over 9 years agoPRAY--PRAY...FOR SLEEP TO RETURN
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ before the Tsunami returns to our shore. TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousalmost 9 years agohmmm
Nice! I like it
The first 2 lines, though:
We met and the earth moved.
We came together and it quaked.
moved is stronger than quaked. is that what you intend? How about:
We met and the earth moved.
We came together and even heaven quaked.
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