All Comments on 'The Gift'

by The_Technician

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh Yes!!

I really enjoyed this - keep on going with it. Be good to see where it takes you.

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
impressive

T, i gotta say this is one of the cleverest flash stories I have ever read since Alexandra Erin's collection.

I would have to go back to the Alfred Hitchcock and Ellery Queen magazines, of many decades ago to find comparable terse prose.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh crap.. hope that officer has his act together..LOL

Well that was something. Hi.. Oh by the way your whole life is open to me......

Fuck No secrets.. Best had a good life or Well lets just say your history....lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Stuff!

Please keep going with this! It was excellent!

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 9 years ago
Excellent

This is fate stepping in to correct mistakes that could be made. I'd like to meet that baba yaga. I'm pure of heart...

Yeah right

Five Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Superb

...as always.

Serious question for the author: have you ever been published?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Only one complaint....

Only one complaint....

There aren't enough good stories like yours around and you cheat by making them so short

We all understand time is at a premium, flesh out the stories, add more depth and in this one, you could create a series where the gift took her through different experiences for the rest of her life

Believe me, every one of your fans would appreciate it

Great Story, Great voice, Great imagination and yes, I am being redundant deliberately

Thanks for the time you give without anything in return from most

LVGirlLVGirlabout 9 years ago
Strange, Lovely and Twisted

What a wonderful and awful Gift.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...