by wingwagon
It was pretty good. I didn't see any major grammatical or plot problems, but a few more details would have been nice. Other than that it was a great story. Nice, short, and no excess "plot" that other writers seem to have problems with.
I would love to watch my wife get fucked like that. To top it off i would like to video it and be right there watching the entire time.
I loved this. I wish my wife got fucked like this. My first wife fucked my best friend at least twice that I know about and probalby more.