All Comments on 'One on One'

This was good but quick anatomy check - the hymen is a thin membrane with a hole right at the opening of the vagina, not inside it. You don't pop it, you stretch it, and it's right at the Opening, not an inch or two inside.

I was enjoying this story very much until I got to the "two inch thick, eleven inches long" and I lost interest. I am female who loves sex and loves to read. I do not speak for all women, but the women I know do not need to hear cock size or bra size.

Such a great start, it was a shame to come to that description.

I am also confused by the category.

But you write well.

This is a beautifully told romantic story, full of passion and loving interrelationships. The categorization, however, is perhaps not the best; Erotic Couplings would have been a better categorization, and Romance better still. Also, the hymen is not in the place indicated in the story. However, overall, this is a great story, full deserving of a Five Star rating.