All Comments on 'Super Dildo'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
anti climatic

I like the idea, but you should have gone into so much more detail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please?

Great concept, and I enjoyed the story, but was left wanting so much more. No character or plot development, it's almost as if this was an idea you've had but lost interest during the process. Why not try again but with more going on and aim for a minimum of 4 times as much story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what kind of machine

What kind of machine was this my wife would love it

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