by VelvetCream
Really enjoying this and am excited to see where it goes! Longer chapters,would be better, but I don't mind too much as you seem to be posting quickly - which is great!!
An unusual kind of story, combining werewolves with lactating, but that's never been a negative to me before! At least on it's own it wasn't. And since I like your writing (no language mistakes jumped out yet, and the dosages of description, emotion and dialogue and the pace of action are good)
Curious to see where it goes and if I continue to like your plot!
She is going to end up falling in love with the crazy alpha.
I wonder if they ever thought of asking females if they wanted to donate their bodies first before kidnapping them.
Would like to see longer chapters though, but if you're going to post every day, well I'm happy with that. :)
Said they'd not found anyone for 30 years. And they is a sickness. Not really that kind of time, eh?
To see where this will go and get some back story on why they need her milk to cure this sickness. Please continue
one page at a time is a tease. But I will be a patient reader...sigh..lol
I'm absolutely obsessed with this story! Please please please add chapters! Also I think you should do more than one page.
Read all three chapters want to read more of your work. I want to know what happens next.......
Wonder if she is his mate though. Hope u clear that question up soon
I have a seriously difficult time finding literotica that I like, this one is going so good, please consider adding chapters.
This is such a intriguing concept and story I would greatly appreciate you adding longer chapters hopefully soon. The story just excites me.
There are a large number of us on pins and needles waiting to see the next
chapter !
We are all awaiting the next chapter. You have something great here....keep writing!
I do hope you continue this, but no pressure. I'm just really enjoying the plot line and character development. This story is great and already has me hooked after three chapters. Please continue writing.
Enjoying your twist on werewolves and ability to express your imagination. Good on ya!
Do not expect any more from the writer. It's been forgotten as so many others.
I wish the story would continue. I keep coming back to this writer hoping to see new additions.