All Comments on 'Bound Friends Pt. 01'

By far one of the best stories I've read on here. Considering you put "Pt. 01" in the title I'm assuming there is more to come, which I can't wait to see. If you want to know what to improve, your grammar could use a little polishing. Other than that the story was great!

Thank you for a really well-told and exciting story. As the first Anonymous pointed out, your presentation could be improved, but the story itself is first-class. Thank you for sharing it with us, and I look forward to Part 2 whenever you decide to submit it. Five stars.

Loved this, over looked the errors as I was enjoying it too much, kind of reminds me of the scene in the movie men in black where there is a little alien with numerous hands doing the job of 20 men!

I'm half way to thinking the reason the box is so big is because there is a person in there!!!

Looking forward to chapter 2, hopefully not a long wait xx

more more more...............please.....

More please ;)

Extremely well written story and looking forward to another part :D :D

This was a really hot story. Thanks for writing!

Really well written. Super hot and the premise of the machine and the game is new and refreshing. Would love to see this continue

brilliant - can't wait for more!

You have a great "hook" in the box knowing them and giving commands. I love that anxiety. This is so hot. I am coming to the party a little late. I just found it. I hope you make them do something that torments their feet. Like putting beer bottle caps in their shoes and made to stand or walk on them. At least mention that they have to take off their shoes whenever they have to strip or otherwise get naked. I am certainly looking for more.

is a statement so inadequate as a justification. A diabetic's mouth might salivate at the offer 2 dozen donuts. But eating them would be a catastrophe.

I like to drive at 100 mph but doing it regardless of where I am could be fatal.

I have looked briefly at later parts of this series and it is clear that going down this path was not in their best interest. So clearly 'Adam' is not progrmmed to protect them.

my ,my , my , said the spider to the fly .......

intriguing & interesting plot

engaging & entertaining writing.

xxxhugsxxx

I truly enjoyed reading this, the story is interesting and captivating.

There were typos, but they were few and far between. Five stars!

This was a great chapter that quickly became a favorite. The slow pressure of pushing the girls into more than they expected made for an exciting level of tension.

This story made me sooo wet!

hawt, seXi, and I would luv to play

Well rounded characters, an amazing plot and some excellent detail has made this one of my favorite stories ever. Thank you.

I’ve been reading Literotica for years. This is one of the best I’ve read, ever.

Can’t wait to read the rest.

Wow. Novel approach. I think this is one of the best Ive read. Keep it up.

Has to be one of the best stories I have read on here. You are a really good writer and story teller.

Naturally her former friends felt that they had no need to be honest with a liar.

After doing to Lea all the things she had done to them they put her in her car naked and sent her home with a warning never to comtact them ever again

Most software game designers / seller are doing it for money and have very little concern for the mental health of users.

Jjust because you enjoy something does not mean it does you no harm. Think alcohol, cocaine, heroin and a score of other drugs. Consider skiing. Did I hear thats not dabgerous? Ask yout insurer how much they will payout if you are unable to work for 6 months, You need more than medical cover! Some heath policys specificaly exclude skiing!

Back to that machne; once they started there was no way out, They were absolutely dependant on the designers and coders of the progran. If you think that's ok then flying in a 737 max would not have bothered you? After all the planes manufacturer insisted there was nothing wrong until congress investigators showed them the bad code.

I got a distinction for the programing part of my maths degree so am very aware of howe easily bad code gets into a program.

So let the buyer/user beware especialy as many software providers limit their liability to the price you pad for the product not for what your costs if it goes wrong

I absolutely loved this! I hope there's more to come with the game and friends! Definitely going to be reading more of your writing! Thank you for your hard work and sharing this!