All Comments on 'Hunter of Time'

The start of a great story and I hope there's more soon. Thank you for sharing.

so will is tims dad and lizzy is his mom.damn that was easy.

It won't be the first time I've had some precognition when reading something.

To avoid anything detracting from the tale you tell, I'll put aside any notions I have of knowing wtf is going to happen.

I like the way the story's going and am waiting to see what happens next.

and a strong basic premise. A lot of directions this one can go in, too.

Pretty easy to make your main character independently wealthy, with a little proper investing, given his foreknowledge of future events. Be careful, though... time travel can lead into some interesting (and amusing) paradoxes.

Thank you for all the ratings and comments/suggestions, some of you already figured the whole under-plot, but don't let that ruin the story for you. ETA on chapter two is indefinite.