All Comments on 'Climax to a Confession'

I bet she has drawer full of dildos my kind of old broad tenbears43 keep her story going

You are a gifted short story writer. Your story is interesting, pungent and not

over-burdened with unnecessary prose, just as a good short story should be.

With the actual "blue bits" cleaned up a little, you ought to send this story to

a publisher. I'm sure you could have a literary future.

I live in Australia so I can't recommend any specific U.S. organization, but

I'm sure you could find several.

Very cute story, reminds me of when I was in the Navy stationed in Long Beach I was 19 at the time, two buddies and me rented an apartment so we would have a place to stay on weekends, I met up with this 49 year old woman that lived there and soon was in her bed, she even gave me money once and a while when I was broke and let me use her car.

It all came crashing down one day when she caught me fucking my buddies 21 year old cousin who had come to visit (he was gone) it was fun while it lasted, she thought it was love and it broke her heart that I would be with another woman. (the year was 1961)

Thanks for the feedback above!

ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ. I AGREE WITH THE GUY FROM DOWN UNDER. EXCEPT I"M NOT SURE YOU NEED TO CLEAN IT UP. TRY AMAZON'S SELF PUBLISHING FOR KENDEL. I DID AND HAVE SOLD A FEW BOOKS, AND I DON'T WRITE NEARLY AS GOOD AS YOU.

Story went from 0-AWESOME in two sentences!

What a delightful gem of a story to stumble upon years after it was posted. Loved it, thank you!