All Comments on 'Just the Way You Are'

by Sandwiches_Are_Good_Too

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

that dirty bitch i hope her ex finds out what happened

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Simply brilliant

bluesky496bluesky496over 9 years ago

great story ,love to read more .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Happy ending? Not really. Mom was bitch. Fucked those kids up and now they are going to save the world. Ok

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well...

Sandwiches might be good, too. But I'm not sure this story is!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
In this particular case...

I think "sandwiches" absolutely SUCK. Lame name, lame author, lame story.

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 9 years ago
I liked it

I am not a literary critic but it gave me a hard on and is somewhat what I would like to have done to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

this was interesting. is there a part 2 in the works?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sandwiches, yes, this, no!

I also hope there is a part 2. And I hope it doesn't get posted because part 1 was more cliche bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Brilliant?

Nothing "brilliant" about this. Almost positive that had to be the author commenting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

8.5/10 i'd read more of it ... the story is fucked up so... good job, i like it.

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 7 years ago

this story calls for revenge by the younger brother.

another part should be writen to see justice done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Next chapter please!!!!

It's the best story i have read! Everything was so crisp and nice. Please please make another chapter or a similar story!

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