by Sandwiches_Are_Good_Too
Happy ending? Not really. Mom was bitch. Fucked those kids up and now they are going to save the world. Ok
I think "sandwiches" absolutely SUCK. Lame name, lame author, lame story.
I am not a literary critic but it gave me a hard on and is somewhat what I would like to have done to me.
I also hope there is a part 2. And I hope it doesn't get posted because part 1 was more cliche bullshit.
Nothing "brilliant" about this. Almost positive that had to be the author commenting.
8.5/10 i'd read more of it ... the story is fucked up so... good job, i like it.
this story calls for revenge by the younger brother.
another part should be writen to see justice done.
It's the best story i have read! Everything was so crisp and nice. Please please make another chapter or a similar story!