All Comments on 'Steve & Sally'

Not bad, but shame about the two glaring mistakes.

""He did it go?"'

and

nob should be knob.

That's two pretty serious typos - especially that missing k. Thanks for spotting them; apologies for the errors.

My dear anonymous friend,

Thank you for your informed analysis of my work, feedback which I particularly welcome as it so skilfully evaluated my use of the short story form and erotic motif. It's rare to see such adept deconstruction expressed so succinctly.

Your advice, though unoriginal and certainly not well-intentioned, has duly been noted, and I cordially send the reciprocal message direct to your fundament.