All Comments on 'Behind Closed Doors'

by dancingonmyown

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow.

So very nice. I wish there were more writers like you on this site.

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

good but nothing to see it was a lesbian love scene

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
redlion75 shut the FUCK UP

awesome I'm so wet

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

Awesome, I'm hard!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Response to redlion75

Look closer. The narrator says she removed her shirt and bra. If that's not enough add you imagination if really want to exaggerate it. But it's a good short story. Love your work. Still waiting for At last 2!

KatieAnnBBKatieAnnBBalmost 9 years ago
Beautiful and very very sexy

I love your writing and your lovemaking style--or at least the style you give to your characters. Sexy, sweet and literate. Wow.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 6 years ago
Simply wonderful

Thanks for sharing this quiet tale. It is very well told.

Thanks.

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